Wednesday, May 24, 2017

Writing with Meghan-1 (1 hour) By Ethan

Part 1  Quick writing: observe a picture provided by Meghan
  1. There are 4 people in the picture.
  2. There are 3 candles on a tri-holder candle holder.
  3. There is a spoon on the table.
  4. The table is covered in what looks like flowers.
  5. There is a mug or teapot on the table.
  6. There is also a second spoon on the table plus a camera.
  7. Two of the people are kids.
  8. There is a table behind them.

Part 2  Show, Don’t Tell!

  It was the first day of school. I wake up at 6:55am, waddle to the bathroom, use the toilet, wash my hands and face and go downstairs. It takes me 15-20 minutes to morph down my breakfast. Then I brush my yellowish teeth, changing, rush back downstairs. I grab my backpack with some books and a binder in it, and my lunch box and rush out the door just in time.

Part 3  Think of the ideal job for you when you grow up. Now think of reasons why this would be a good job for you. Write an essay to explain why this is your ideal job.

  I want to be a banker when I grow up. Being a banker means that hopefully I become very rich. I used to want to be a chef. But now I want to be a banker. If I have a lot of money, I can help people in need and live a life of luxury.

  I’m good at math. This is essential to being a good banker. I’m also good at reading, this could also help me. With more money, I could see life as never before. Poor people could also have this happen to them.

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