Monday, September 4, 2017

Writing with Meghan-9 (1 hour) By Ethan

Part 1 Quick writing: observe a picture provided by Meghan
  1. The only color is the front man's blue shirt.
  2. Are they cheering for the Red Sox?
  3. They look very busy spreading the Cheerie-cheeries all over wherever they are.
  4. Is the blue-shirted man's pants backward?!
  5. They are not very slim. ( Well, some aren't)
  6. They are all holding streamers.
Part 2 Persuasive - your teacher is debating if she should assign homework. Persuade her not to.

Central Idea: Not having the teacher assigning homework
Reason 1: No more mountains of anti-stress toys
Reason 2: No more angry after school sports coaches
Reason 3: No more "I'm late." remarks for after school classes.
Conclusion: Homework can lead to serious

Part 3 Informative Writing: Write a letter to your Principal saying what you think needs to be changed about your school

Dear Mrs. Dixon,

There are some things that I think need to be changed about Roosevelt Elementary School.

1st, the classrooms are toooo small. Would you be so kind as to make them 999 nonillion times bigger?
2nd, The library needs to have 20,000,000 more books.
3rd, Install a soccer field on the roof.
4th, We should host a teacher mannequin throwing contest. 
5th, The playground needs to have a sextillion swings. 
6th, The computer room should have 900,000,000,000,000 more computers.
7th, To prevent back pain, and hundreds of trips to the nurse's office, why not put some pillows on the chairs?

Your student,

Ethan Li

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