Monday, September 4, 2017

Writing with Meghan-11 (1 hour) By Ethan

Part 1 Quick writing: observe a picture provided by Meghan
  1. Their hands are moving like mad!
  2. They must be very excited.
  3. They are in a stadium of an unknown sports.
  4. Why is THE PICTURE SO YELLOW???
  5. Is the camera lens smeared with gold?

Part 2 Simple/Complicated Paragraph
  • Simple:  Lily is walking. She goes in the store and buys soup. Lily then warms the soup and feeds it to her mother. Her mother is very ill. The soup makes her better.
  • Complicated: Lily, the magnifying glass is taking a stroll to the glass market. She enters, trips over a glass water melon, and falls flat on her face. She gets up, walks to the soup department, and buys a can of red hot, molten shatter material. She goes home, feeds the soup to Mother Microscope, who has pencil disease, and she is immediately cured!
Part 3 Prep for Essay - Plan

Rules are important. What are the most important rules at your school and why are they important?

Main Topic: Rules
Rule: No bullying - Why? They could get hurt
Rule: No littering - Why? No more rat kingdom
Rule: Respect your teacher - Why? Because they work hard to give us knowledge.
Conclusion: Respect school rules and people


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