Tuesday, September 5, 2017

Writing with Meghan-14 (1 hour) By Ethan

Part 1 Quick writing: observe a picture provided by Meghan
  1. There are flowers everywhere.
  2. Impossible to count all of them ( Is it 14, 15 or 16?) !!!
  3. There are near-invisible flowers on the white background.
  4. There is a blue stripe at the bottom.
Part 2 Nouns
  • Person - Mrs. Long, Mom, Dad, me, Meghan, George Washington, Abraham Lincoln, Beethoven, King Charles the Third, Leonardo da Vinci, Vincent van Gogh
  • Place - Hog Warts, Norman, NYC, Beijing, India
  • Thing - Flash light, cat, dog, cap, bag, long skinny window, violin, teeth, microbe
3 noun sentences
  1. Mom and Dad are my supporters to grow.
  2. I have been in Norman, NYC and Beijing for more than 2 days at one point.
  3. If I weren't allergic to them, I would have 1 cat and 1 dog as pets.
Part 3 Who did it? Case File for the eyes of detective Ethan only
Crime!
On November 22, a man dressed in black robbed a bank on main street. According to reports, the man used no weapon, instead he relied on physical strength to intimidate the tellers.
A witness identified the man as about six feet tall with big muscles. One of the tellers states the man wore a ski mask.

You are the detective assigned to this case. It is your job to track the man down.

Evidence!
  • approx height - 6 ft
  • approx weight - 265 lb
  • clothing worn - ski mask, black outfit
  • weapon used - none
  • casualties - none
  • injuries - none
  • physical evidence - curly brown hair, size 11 footprint
  • witnesses - The tellers
Suspect # 1
  • name - Lance Steward
  • age - 24
  • height - 6'1"
  • weight - 210 lb
  • shoe size - 10 1/2
  • hair color - blonde
  • motive - bank refused to give him a loan
  • hobbies - fishing, reading
Suspect # 2
  • name -John Evans
  • age - 36
  • height - 6'
  • weight - 320 lb
  • shoe size - 11
  • hair color - red
  • motive - had a run in with one of the tellers
  • hobbies - watching Netflix, weight lifting
Who do you tell the police to arrest?  John Evans
Statement
Write a statement to the police explaining why he was the one who robbed the bank. Include evidence and motive.

I believe John Evans is guilty because he is exactly 6 ft tall, has a size 11 foot print, and he weight lifts to make himself strong. Lance is innocent because he must not be that strong since he does not weight lift and his shoe size is too small. I think that the hair belongs to John Evans because  a lot of red hair looks red while a single hair could look brownish. Maybe when John ran in the teller, the teller did or said something that made him want to rob the bank.

"We the jury find the defendant guilty of bank robbery."

Good Job Detective Ethan!

Thanks to you, the criminal is safely behind bars.

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