Saturday, April 14, 2018

Writing with Meghan-19 (1 hour) By Ethan

Part 1 Quick writing: observe a picture provided by Meghan

1. There is a creepy picture.
2. The girl has one gray eye and one orange eye.
3. She seems to be a teenager or a grownup.
4. She looks normal.
5. She looks bored.
6. Her hair must be a foot long.

Part 2 Analyzing Song Lyrics

10 Steps to Analyze/Write a Parody
1. Number the lines of the song.
2. Read through the song once.
3. What is the main message of the song?
That you can do great things.
4. Go line by line and write the purpose of each line.
5. Which line is the most important?
Line no. 6
6. Why is it the most important?
Because it describes the theme the best.
7. Which line is the least important?
Line no. 1
8. Highlight the top 10 most important words to the song’s message.
9. Write a message you would like someone to know.
I am a big figiter.
10. Change the highlighted words to reflect your message.

Original lyrics:

1.Yeah I know that you never knew how to plan things
(That the audience is dumb?)
2.You gotta lucky star and you got a lot of big dreams
(That the audience is too rich?)
3. Maybe you should think a little bit more about you
(The audience should consider their jealousy.)
4.Cuz the things that you say always seem to come true
(The audience can make their dreams come true all the time)
5.And you never knew that you would be responsible
(The audience could do responsible things)
6.And you never knew that you could maybe change the world
(And that the audience could become famous)

Parody – Final copy

Yeah I know that you never knew how to concentrate
You gotta a busy hand and you got a lot of stress
Maybe you should consider a little bit more about the other fidgeters
Cuz the things that you think always seem to come handy 
and you never thought that you would be so creative
And you never considered that you could maybe change fidgeting history

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